May 01, 2005

Turd in a Punchbowl Meme....

Julie tagged me...
The rules are simple: write a poem with "turd in a punchbowl" in the first and third lines, then pass it on to 3 unsuspecting victims. Do check back to Blog d'Elisson and tell him just exactly what you think of this . . . meme.

My first attempt was a haiku using the 5/7/5 format.

Turd in a punchbowl.
Floating atop the red juice.
Life sucks for the drunks.

The problem is , that I did not use it in the third line so, I will attempt to do it right this time.

Turd in a punchbowl.
If I could turn back the hands of time.
Turd in a punchbowl.
I would have made sure the shit wasn't mine.

Who to tag?
Chuck from Burst Transmission, DC from Daisy Cutter, and Ralph from Makes me Ralph.

Posted by Jess at May 1, 2005 03:13 PM

Is that sort of like polluting your own well? Oh, maybe not quite that drastic...

Liked the first one better - - pollute others not yourself.... but hey.. good effort!

Posted by: JulieB at May 1, 2005 10:58 PM

Crud, I used it in the second and fourth on mine.

Posted by: Chuck @ BurstTransmission at May 2, 2005 08:05 AM

Jess ...

Got mine up, man. It' over. DC rules the punchbowl.

Posted by: DC at May 4, 2005 02:12 PM

We will see DC. Headed over now.

Posted by: jess @ LOSLI at May 4, 2005 03:41 PM
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